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Dance

Upon a misty shore,
her spirit dances ~


nature's melody
    enraptures her soul...

Oh, if this were heaven --

    she'd dance forever.

 

 

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    February 28

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    the images that I see in my mind as I read this poem are not only vivid but beautiful.. this has a peaceful air about it.. I love that, and I can see her dancing.. I really love this poem, excellent take on the prompt.

    good luck
    kat


  • maralisa silver member
    February 28
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    a beautiful poem good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Yenny S.
    February 28
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    Its very pretty, I like it~Yen


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    February 28

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    Aww how so very pretty. Great write young man. Best of luck to you!


  • crimsondew
    February 28
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    so fanciful...beautiful!

    All the best!


  • Dragonbabyx3
    February 27
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    Beautiful take on the prompt! beautiful!

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