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Wrong Place - [haiku]


 
    winter blast
polar… froze to a limb
                  blank stare - -



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modern haiku, picture inspired;

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    March 16

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    Thank you for your entry in the contest. A lovely interpretation of the picture prompt and a very good economic use of wordage.
    All the best...
    Sue


  • Naughtygrlred
    February 28
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    362...how is that haiku


    • Malabu
      February 28
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      its a modern haiku
      not traditional 5=7=5 there is different forms of haiku


      • Naughtygrlred
        February 28
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        i only know of tanka...So how please explain a modern ku to me please so i can do some...i love haiku