Tonight
Drawing hearts on notebook paper feels so right
I remember the day you walked out the door
Everyday I will miss you more and more
Over the ocean and across the deep blue see
My heart aches for you
As your heart aches for me
Across the miles
My body craves you
Across the world
After another year alone
Waiting for your return home
Tonight as I write a <3 love letter to you
I take the time to dream of memories past
I hope this love letter isn’t our last
Across the ocean of deep blue
I love you and I want you to know
That every night,
Drawing hearts feels just right
Across the miles of the deep blue
I just want to be with you
Author notes
A contest entry
- quote prompt by Christina by Lonely Christina.
550 points, ended March 15, 2009, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a really good love poem. My favorite part is "I love you and I want you to know
That every night,
Drawing hearts feels just right
Across the miles of the deep blue
I just want to be with you" That part is amazing, good luck in the contest
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AMY
i missed you wifey! omgggg lol
ok ok onto the poem, i love this...the emotions are so real and i can relate to this totally. my fav lines are "I love you and I want you to know
That every night,
Drawing hearts feels just right" you really hit the nail on the head and did a great job with the prompt. good job babe
hope ill talk to you sumtime
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