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Bathroom

Lying naked under the blanket
with wakeful eyes and mind
thinking how to pass
that long night

Gave up and rose from bed
with brush on right hand
to scrub
not a human body
but the bath tiles

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trying to be funny

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  • Liquid memories
    February 28

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    Deception

    you did it to me, thinking I was in for a treat. smiles.
    Thank you for sharing your thoughts and night work, or perhaps early morning. At any rate, you got my attention and woke me. lol.
    I like what you have writen.