You promised me
that love would be sweet,
but I was left with curdled promises
and a mouthful of sour pulp.
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A contest entry
- QUICK QUICKIE! by luna-midnight.
400 points, ended February 27, 2009, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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your writing is beyond perfection
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lemony lovely.
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nice job i love it.. keep it up...
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hehehe ewww sour pulp....sounds like a man
love this. very deep and strong. good luck and thnaks for entering
Stephanie ♥
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