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III. Tanka Exercise


A tiny window
frames the clouds
drifting
in my dreams
I am also flying

Author notes

Pivoting Practice!
Kaminoku: Describing the physical view from an airplane window
Shimonoku: I am having a dream about flying, while on a plane
Kakekotoba: drifting: could be describing the clouds or to my dreams.

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