When does the heart stop searching,
when does the arguments start.
Instead of looking outwards,
try searching your loved ones heart.
She lives for your every whim,
often goes that extra mile.
And never does she think it might be the end,
for her wings spread wide with your every smile.
Instead of looking out lets see whats here at home,
dress up as though you were going out and then stay at home.
When was the last time you whispered I love you true,
and watch her light up and be there for you.
When was the last time you came home early,
with a surprise for no reason at all.
And told her get fixed up for a night out,
and hold her and kiss her against the wall.
Men they dont realize those women are working to,
for keeping a house and children is not a simple muse.
So give her the credit due and lend a hand now and then,
give mama a break so she can be that princes for you once again.
You leave and look for love outside the home,
when its not love at all .
You think within the home,
all the excitment is gone.
But wrong you are my man,
for women are women you see.
and for that woman there at home,
other men see what you refuse to see.
So if you loved her and children
you have at your feet,
know together that love together
you in the middle can meet.
For what you find on the run
cost dearly my man,
to find yourself in the same situation
with no money in hand.
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So when you run around and find yourself having your wages garnished and being so broke you cant find anyone to go out with you except ladies of the night that could mean it could be your life then blame no one but yourself .For you see if business was taken care at home you wouldnt be out on the street you see .
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Very wise
This is very good advice Patty, we men should do exactly as you say
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SO MUCH IN THIS!!!!
So many relationships end just because of this very thing
I do believe my ex wanted more, just what she would not say. I would come home , treat her nice, but I wanted to share our evening just us and many times she always wanted to go to her parents, or to her sisters or brothers place. Never just us, always her family came first, and that destroyed what was between us. So many have to go elsewhere, and not with their spouse. 
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She lives for your every whim,
often goes that extra mile.
And never does she think it might be the end,
for her wings spread wide with your every smile.
beautiful stanza. loved all of it.
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a wonderful write my freind how true thank you for sharing
maralisa
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there is a pattern
men stop investing in their women,they tried there darnest to get them at first? promising the moon and the stars,
now after they have them every thing stop? this is will written and so true!
I love this read!
Rend
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Patty,
You are sooooooo right! If only all men could see this and understand the point you are trying to make! (like my ex
) This is great! I love every word of this one! Maybe the younger men of today, will get the hint with this one.
and love
Nyetta
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