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Ten Feet Off The Ground, (Triolet)

Ten feet off the ground
Guess what, my gal said yes
To Heaven on earth I am bound
Ten feet off the ground
Where ecstasy, euphoria surround
The Lord sure me did bless
Ten feet off the ground
Guess what, my gal said yes.

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  • JinSays gold member
    March 3
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    Sweet, and congratulations.
    Love,
    jin

  • jadeangyal
    February 27
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    This is the perfect form for such a moment--spinning, euphoric. Well done.