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Celestial Moon


As the light
from the stillness of silence
penetrates the motes of my body,
they transform into
crystals of radiant love,
emitting rays of gratification.

No longer am I separate
from my beloved of sublime passion;
my spirit creating ripples
across awareness,
to manifest its submissive desires.

Now every moment I experience
brings the harmonious intoxication
of an eternal ecstasy,
and I am speechless with joy,
just as the celestial moon.



Thank you for reading.

by Sukhdarshan
Feb. 27, 2009



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  • smitaanand
    October 22

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    Fantabulous so amazingly beautiful and delightful that afterreading it Ifelt replete with ecstacy and asense of wholesome completion as though I had savoured a delectable morsel and indeed it is adelectable morsel of thoughts so exquisite that i am enamoured by this verse.The words though simple were filled with depth, emotion and inherennt meaning.Every linne is alive with sentiments genuine and honestly sublime.It was almost a spiritual journey.Thanks glad you shared and take care...


    • Grateful
      October 22
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      thank you so much smitaanand, for your noble comment...all the best..grateful


  • Rheea gold member
    July 11
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    exquisite


  • Vickie Rosa
    June 20

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    beautiful

    beautifuly done my friend, a very artistic view, lovely imagry, very pationate piece.
    best of wishes


    • Grateful
      June 20
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      thank you so much Vickie, for your kind and comforting words...all the best...Grateful


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    June 16
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    Calm and beautiful. You did an excellent job. Thanks for sharing.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


    • Grateful
      June 16
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      thank you so much SP, for your inspiring comment.
      Grateful


  • rhondasail
    May 1
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    As I read this again I am ...expanded...there is a wonderful spaciousness to this write Darshan...always a pleasure to read it...Peace, Rhonda

  • rhondasail
    February 28
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    I do love the imagery you use here, Darshan. The contrasts of immensity and simplicity, rising and sinking, fluidity and crystaline, are beautifully blended here. You have a great gift of moving the heart beyond the limits of flesh to the heights of the divine. Bless you. Peace, Rhonda

    • Grateful
      March 1

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      thank you so much Rhonda, for your positive and noble feedback....your kind comment is much appreciated....all the best...darshan


  • albymyheart gold member
    February 28
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    Ahhhh...so very beautiful my friend. You lead us straight into the mood with an outstanding first stanza, then follow through with those amazing words of yours, right to the very end. The celestial moon, speechless with joy...what a lovely thought. A fine write...alby


    • Grateful
      February 28
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      thank you so much Alby, for your kind and comforting words...all the best...Grateful


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