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It's nothing

It was the colour of the air
pushed from her palm
as her fingers curled;

taut


her eyes reflected
the hues of the traffic
on an airless city night


bitter;


chocolate wisps
tickled her cheeks
as shadows chased
and passed.


It wasn’t how she expected.
She imagined a circle or
a triangle or a square
but it resembled more
of a dodecahedron or
a tree or a ghost.


Blighted;


she quickened her pace
almost skipping over
the grooves in the concrete;


so close to almost
she felt the nothing
underfoot,


and trampled it.

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  • Mariana gold member
    February 27

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    This is wonderful. Such an ethereal poem. I love the way you have danced on the edge of reality!

    Mariana  


  • ylova
    February 27

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    I love this. Amazing word choice and imagery! Well done and thanks for sharing.

    Love,
    Ylova