Eyes liquid pools of lust,
body framed in perfection
with the unseen crutch.
Dance of evil the venom flows,
as she disguises herself as a lovely rose.
Touch of an angel
heat felt with a sting,
She floats about her man
her trap within she brings.
Whispers upon his neck, hot breath,
the game she plays so well,
as she dances the dance of the viper,
lips red as the apple of hell.
She entices her prey
with laughter and the look of need,
her young gentleman blinded
by lust and greed.
Two enter twined lost to time
all the while,
she takes his soul then kicks back
with a venomous smile.
At the eve of the sunrise
when the drugs wear off,
she drifts back into reality
and feels her time lost.
She returns to her lair
and sleeps the death sleep,
until the sunset
and she replenishes her eyes of deceit.
Author notes
your eyes danced with amphetamines
your lips screamed poison apple
A contest entry
- [*QuotePrompt.] by thegirlsafaultline..
525 points, ended February 28, 2009, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Really creative and written with skill.
Great write!
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Ooh; great poem. I really like the words you used, good emotion also. Makes me think of dark angels or vampires x3 Beauty write.
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Great take on the prompt.
It reminded me a little of vampires to be honest, lol.
I liked it alot though.
(:
Great write, thanks for entering!
Good Luck. -
a great take on the promt my friend good luck in the contest
maralisa
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