There's this child named Amy
Shes a newborn
Better yet she's my new born
We live in a one room apartment
I sleep on the floor she sleeps in a cardboard box in the corner
I watch her while she sleeps
Shes so beautiful i want nothing but the best for her
The world wont except her she's Australian and Black
No one will love her but all she needs is me, yes me
My daughter needs her mother to love her no matter what
Everyone in this *bunny* world can say that i'm crazy
But i don't care because in this world its just me and my Amy!
Her small hands
Her small feet
Her beautiful smile makes laugh
Shes beautiful
And shes mine you cant take my world away
No one can take my overly joyful Amy
A contest entry
- Baby Time! :D by Missa.
400 points, ended March 12, 2009, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think
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AWWW!!!! you tell em'!
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nice
i find the *bunny* thing very amusing i really like this -
wow!
extremely well done!!!!
just one question....
did you make this up?
or do you really have a kid?
anyway well done
ella
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I love this poem it is so sweet. Best of the luck in the contest!
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thats really sweet that you care about your child...
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aww! this is so sweet! i LOOOOOOOOOOOVE it! this was so pretty and i enjoyed reading it. the emotions jumped out at me as i read this. your daughter, as breaking said, is very very lucky. good luck in the contest!
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Beautiful
This is really sweet and is beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading it and it even made me want to cry. Really well done : )
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This is beautiful, Very very beautiful...
I love it Sweetie.
Your daughter is very lucky.
~~silently-breaking
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Awww nice write =]
I liked it, keep the pen going.
Tash.
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