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Bitter

Something about the cold
reminds me of liquid sorrow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • J Macabre
    February 27, 2009

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    Hm...two sentences yet so much is said.
    When one is depressed or full of pain its true...their body is more receptive to the cold.


  • liltulip gold member
    February 27, 2009

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    brrrr

    so few words, and soooo cold in cleveland too, love your words here thank you for sharing them with us!


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    February 27, 2009

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    Gorgeous, doll. I just got to thinking how hampering the cold can be and how when you get especially frozen you can hardly move or do what you need to do. The same is true with sorrow... and liquid sorrow, here, seems to indicate a sorrow that is both tangible and perhaps uncontrollable, you can't contain it, or stop in, or hold it in your hands and do with it what you want. Anyhow, the words here are very provoking. Poignant.


  • luna-midnight silver member
    February 27, 2009

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    haha, this is brillant, and it stumps me! so funny, im like nodding my head like so true, yet thinking more about it! thanks for distracting my bordeom
    Stephanie ♥


    • February Moon gold member
      February 27, 2009

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      It's freezing right now in stupid Canada, and when I went outside to get in the car, this was what popped into my mind.


      • luna-midnight silver member
        February 27, 2009
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        you live in canada? thats sooo cool
        and im cold right now, my hands are freezzzing 0.o

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