"Our Dreams Tear Like Frozen Razorblades" that never had a chance
To slice through someones silky skin, to make their blood dance
The dreams we had of living
The dreams we had of ♥ love ♥
All go up in a puff of smoke
With one tiny {shove}
We dreamed about forever
Dreamed of having mini-mes
and now I am here crying
I've fallen to my knees.
Nothing seems to m-a-t-t-e-r
Our dreams have (disappeared)
All the bad things that could happen
Have brought about my worst fears
Our dreams
they
are
no
more.
Author notes
blackbloodyrose
I had no idea wut to write, i'm sorry
A contest entry
- All that's left are these pretty words. by Candy Morphine.
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aww sad....ily tho
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No; this is good. The rhyme is nicely put, almost subtle and fits right on with the flow. Nice work.
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"your blood smells of lustrous deciet.
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"When you've lost your hope, when the sky is black; hold the memory of me close." -
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u had already givin me this quote "our dreams they tear like frozen razorblades" but ill write this poem with this one and post it too
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sorry; It's hard to keep track sometimes:/
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