confetti
dances on a breeze
butterflies
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful
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I got a whole huge picture in my mind from these few words here.
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This is beautiful. The title is immediately intriguing--How do you have snowfall in the summer??--it's a seeming contradiction until you get to the end. The first word also hints at something wonderful... something to be celebrated, and indeed once you've read the poem the fullness of that feeling rings true. "Butterflies" then becomes that wonderful "aha" moment characteristic of the best haiku's...a fulfillment of all that was hinted at in the lines before. This is light, imaginative, and truly appealing to picture in my mind's eye. Lovely.
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Oh!
I love this so much....Sigh~
Another one for my list,,,,,
I feel like fluttering now....
Lynda
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Butterflies do resemble to many things, and yes, confetti is one of them. Adorable picture you show here
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