Bending her over while
Slipping panties
down to her knee's
Seperating Hot Pussy lips
for invitation to ecstasy
As My Raging Tongue
insert flames of wicked love
to the depth of her soul
Releasing precious Elixirs
of Cum'liscious cream
all down my throat
Mmmm dalalala la!
That girl has me Speaking in Tongues
A contest entry
- Slip. . . .of the tongue by JinSays.
1006 points, ended March 5, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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my god.
I dont know what else to say.
it's uhhhhh
yummy.
Love,
jin
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WHAT?! Wow, okay. Don't really know what to say. LOL. We all have a little freak in us, I'm not even going to deny it. LOL. This was very vivid and sensual. Good luck in the contest. You should most definitely place with this piece. Love the ending. The play on words. - cgirl0410
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Hot Damn
SIZZLING HOT VIVIDLY WRITTEN.....NASTY & EROTIC-LY SWEET.........
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YUMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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OHHH!
MYYY GODDDD....
I love it!!
as i fan myself....whew, you know how to...with a mere slip of the tongue...giggles, thanks for sharing!
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LOL! This is great bro!
The last line ties it all together.
All the best to you with this one.
Always a pleasure to read you!
Jeremy0826
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speaking in tongues is right LOL!! Great one here from you and I enjoyed reading
Good luck in the contest hon 
Releasing precious Elixirs
of Cum'liscious cream
all down my throat
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