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I Feel What You Feel

I feel what you feel
I feel your happiness
I feel you pains
I try to know when you're hurting
And everone else is fooled by the smile
Even when everone doubts you
I have no doubts
No matter what they say
I'm always proud
Of what you've done
I'll always support you
I'll always love you
And I'll always try to make things better
When things are getting rough
I feel what you feel

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  • Little Lilly Angel
    July 13
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    Aww sounds like you care about this person

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    February 27

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    awesome! this was an amazing poem! i enjoyed it so much! i know how you feel, and i'm always here if you need me. the emotions jumped out at me, and i thought that this piece was really really sweet. I could picture this in my head, and I know what this is about. hehe. very good poem. keep up the good work!

  • Emaudauy
    February 27

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    Write On:

    This is so sweet.
    I could connect with it.
    I love how pure it is.
    I really loved the fifth line.

    Write on!