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Mr. Snowbear

Hi there Mr.Snowbear
Lying upon that branch
May I follow you
To your snow filled ranch

You'll have to let me hang on
As you'll disapear amid the snow
You are so pure white
Your form won't even show

I've knitted a red neck scarf
To wrap around your neck
So I can see you wherever you are
Even in a snowbank by heck

So just enjoy the Winter
And all the falling snow
I'll be back to visit again
No matter where you go

I can see the snowclouds forming
And the wind is getting cold
So why don't we jump over the Rainbow
It's very warm there, I'm told

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    March 16

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    Thank you for your entry in the contest. A charming poem bringing the little snowbear to life and i love the touch with the red scarf.

    All the best in the contest...

    Sue


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    March 13

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    Ah..you are a sensitive poet while displaying the immages of the nature in such a beautiful way..love the flow and the impact..well done..


  • Bev Hilderman gold member
    March 2

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    Wonderful write.Smile


  • daviscth silver member
    February 28

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    This is delightful Katie and makes for a wonderful poem. I also liked the part about the red scarf. Gotta have some way of seeing the little guy. Good luck in the contest my friend.


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    February 27

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    Very nice, I love the idea of the red scarf..

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