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Get it right

Floating into darkness
Reaching out my hand
Hoping for you to take it
A can no longer stand
I'm not here
I slowly dissappear
Screaming
Bleeding
Dieing with fear
I'm gone
No longer strong
I can't take this
I've been gone to long
Laying down
I hear nothing above the ground
Stuck inside this coffin
Not hearing a sound
Unable to move
Can't speak at all
Whats wrong with me
I don't know at all
Is this death
No not quite
It's a suicide
Get it right

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  • GothicFyre
    February 27

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    Dark, powerful, nice irony on the last line.....truly a great poem. Wonderfully written, I loved it.