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Contestation

                                        Whirlwinds race

                              snatching
                                                            pieces
                                        shifting
                                                    sands

                                                chaos


children cower.

          louder

                  LOUDER

                The Voices

              shake the foundation

                                                                                                  of life.

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  • Ken-Maverick
    March 5

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    JUDGED!!

    Definately something I didn't expect,
    wonderful take on the prompt
    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken