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Recognition

Mist from our mouths
rising from windows, out
into the star-spattered sky,

Regarding me from under
dark lashes, like those of a boy
I once knew,
And you remind me of him,

You remind me of a lot of things
as you smile and dimples
form in the corners of the mouth

that I have kissed

Please tell me what you think

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