There is a love that I have the greed upon getting it.
The price of this love has no monetary equivalent
But, it does have price that others place upon it.
It is not so much a person showing me what they find beautiful
But, it is more upon expressing their delight with less of echo of mine.
I cannot say you can find it at hope’s edge of understanding it
But, I want this love by selective people.
These people do not include those who just want to be friends
But, it is more those who might bellow out to say that they love me.
It is my selfish delights that others made me feel more alone as to be in the society.
I would much rather my lover to expose this love as to her desired flesh to enjoy first
And, I feel society dictate the other way around.
Please tell me what you think
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This is a wonderful poem very nicely written, you have a wonderful flow of words, and detail was nice. It was a pleasure to read.
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very nice.
i liked this a lot, and i dont know why! i usually prefer peices that rhyme, but this one was very nicely written, and very nicely read. you described a feeling of longing in a very nice way. thank you. :]
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