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Empty Hands.

These hands are empty now,
But once they held
A baby dying.

The eyes are dry
And steady now,
But once they drowned

In a sea of grief.
These lips
Are silent now,

But once they screamed
And cried aloud
As baby’s death

Was sad announced.
This heart seems mended now,
But it was cleaved

And torn in two
And even on her better days
When all seems calm,

She still senses
Baby’s ghost
In her fragile arms.

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    February 28, 2009

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    omg..this is so sad

    I couldn't even imagine...wow. and you wrote this piece well to portray the emotions.




  • liltulip gold member
    February 27, 2009

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    touching

    this is such a sad write, but it was written beautifully, thank you for sharing this with us at AP!!!!