Her eyes, her mouth, her hair,
are in a class beyond compare,
the very stars she puts to shame,
and birds sing out the name,
of the woman I love.
The sun, it never shines so bright,
no moon, so radiently the night does light,
and the splendour of the dawn,
can't match the smile so warm,
as of the woman I love.
She wares an armour that can't be seen,
on no one will she ever lean,
she hides her hopes, her thoughts, her fears,
and guards them with her anger spears,
does this woman I love.
She may seem hard, she may seem cold,
but if the truth were really told,
a warm, tender heart is beating there,
in this woman I love.
This woman of mystery, this woman so fine,
the one I hope will soon be mine,
she's easy discovered, I'll tell you how,
look in the mirror, you see her now?
Thats...The woman I love!
A contest entry
- Make Me Fall in Love with You... by tearyeyedbutterfly.
600 points, ended March 11, 27 entries
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funny ending too
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aw this is very loving. loved it.
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This is a very lovely poem with a nice little twist at the end! Thank you for entering and good luck!
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Thanks
Many thanks for your kind comments tearyeye, I'm pleased you liked it.
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