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Going Home

Looking up as my feet lead me down
Anyone else would feel sorry for me
But you understand my happiness
It seems dark, but that's just so I can sleep.

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Everyone's home is different. What repels you draws another.

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  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    February 27

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    Oh so true, going home is something we all choose which way to go, and at times again not by choice as to where we go, thank you for this heart felt poem
    good luck
    MM


    • Kikai Ni
      March 2
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      Thanks. I don't write many short poems, but this meant a surprising amount to me. Your understanding is truly touching.