Looking up as my feet lead me down
Anyone else would feel sorry for me
But you understand my happiness
It seems dark, but that's just so I can sleep.
Author notes
Everyone's home is different. What repels you draws another.
A contest entry
- Choose 20 to 30 words and write by misticmoonlite.
575 points, ended February 27, 2009, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Ah. Well, um, yes. So.
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Belive me, going home is where all people want to go. Thank you for this poem, so short yet so touching. Great job
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Thanks. If you don't mind my asking, where did you see this poem? It's kind of old . . .
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Well I love to write poems, but I enjoy reading poems too. So somehow I ran into your profile, I dont know what caught my atention, maybe your profile name or something else... So I searched all your poems, and I liked title of this one so I though: Why not read it?
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Thank you. That's kind of you to say. I'll return the favor when I get a chance.
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Oh so true, going home is something we all choose which way to go, and at times again not by choice as to where we go, thank you for this heart felt poem
good luck
MM
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Thanks. I don't write many short poems, but this meant a surprising amount to me. Your understanding is truly touching.
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