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Going Home

Looking up as my feet lead me down
Anyone else would feel sorry for me
But you understand my happiness
It seems dark, but that's just so I can sleep.

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Everyone's home is different. What repels you draws another.

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  • Bella Dark
    January 28
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    Belive me, going home is where all people want to go. Thank you for this poem, so short yet so touching. Great job


    • Kikai Ni
      January 28
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      Thanks. If you don't mind my asking, where did you see this poem? It's kind of old . . .


      • Bella Dark
        January 28
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        Well I love to write poems, but I enjoy reading poems too. So somehow I ran into your profile, I dont know what caught my atention, maybe your profile name or something else... So I searched all your poems, and I liked title of this one so I though: Why not read it?


        • Kikai Ni
          January 28
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          Thank you. That's kind of you to say. I'll return the favor when I get a chance.

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 27, 2009

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    Oh so true, going home is something we all choose which way to go, and at times again not by choice as to where we go, thank you for this heart felt poem
    good luck
    MM


    • Kikai Ni
      March 2, 2009
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      Thanks. I don't write many short poems, but this meant a surprising amount to me. Your understanding is truly touching.

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