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Delusions Of Humanity

Menacing atrophied roses stand
bent as a manic's mind,
black thorns reaching for delicate skin
to prick the flesh,
and release the wine.

Masked sunlight glitters dully through stained water
in the belly of the reminiscent mason jar.
Fibrous frayed stems,
bloated slightly,
taint the well.

Colorless petals turn to ash,
When touched by desperation,
seeking near-lost memories,
by texture of the dead.


The power of time,
Is that it is timeless and unyielding.
The sun is born and brilliantly dies,
Even the darkest night becomes the day.

And what my fist did,
in the blind power of anger,
will never pass.
It will remain,
As will my delusions of humanity.



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lovelykiller999

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  • DemonicChanel420
    February 27

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    This is a very good write, it has great imagery, and a really good flow, all in all a good write, I really enjoyed reading this and it fits perfectly, but I suggest putting your user name in your author notes before this contest closes or I will DQ you.