Feel your heart naked,
on the river of life;
your memories,
flowing warm under the flesh,
in fur licking pleasures.
Indomitable yearning,
fiery bowels
deadly unrests.
And remember to look like
in the darkness,
still sweating cold.
Caressing bodies,
bare sentiments,
to wander, to traverse,
shots of inebriation.
Author notes
River of Life
A contest entry
- The river of life by Angelo di Luce.
430 points, ended February 27, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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The river of life full of memories, some cold looking back
Nicely done, thank you

