Words spoken in total anger
line now is drawn for life
Waves crashing with each
and every syllable against deaf ears
Friends no longer talking
as both tries to be the top
Closing all open doors
hatred seeps in
Author notes
Prompt - Contestation - a violent arguement
Between 30-40 words no more
A contest entry
- Swift "Contestation" by Ken-Maverick.
650 points, ended March 5, 2009, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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but but but I like!!!!!!!
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JUDGED!!
"Waves crashing with each
and every syllable against deaf ears"
I really like that, nicely penned poet
All the best to you in the contest
Ken -
excellent
What a great creation for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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