What am I living for,
Writing for,
Breathing for,
This darkness has clouded my everything,
I don't know how to feel anymore,
I write empty thoughts,
Hollow words,
Memories,
Memories shattered,
Beyond recognition,
Emotions shredded,
To where there are none,
I'm the empty shell,
With just a hole in it,
Every second,
Losing more and more,
What was there,
I don't want life,
I don't deserve such,
I don't want death,
I don't deserve such mercy,
I want this hole repaired,
And everything to be here,
Pain may feel horrid,
But without it,
How do you feel alive,
Love may hurt,
But without it,
There is no reason to live,
You may want to stop feeling,
But feeling is what makes life,
Life......
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pain is self inflicted
that's my favorite song quote
just passing on a few words of wisdom
your emotion is definitely portrayed and very recognizable to everyone of all ages.
what I've learned is that, as time passes in life,
what you found to be most painful in life,
was merely illusion.
hence why pain is self inflicted...
hope things work out for you:] -
'You may want to stop feeling,
But feeling is what makes life,
Life...... '
I love it, it's deap, its emotional and completly relatable!!!
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many applause, little bro
That is some deep stuff, little man. I feel your poem. I still feel that ways sometimes and I am 24. yeah, I know. I see you have the thoughts… that’s the hard part. Now, write your thoughts in a proper format… that is the kicker, bro. I do feel like free write is always raw and raw is always great. I liked it. Keep on penning and the ink will flow like a raging river in time. Again, God job!
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Its depp nad laways a pleasure to read your work, The pain and empyiness of one's heart can be horrid, and eats you alive, but you word you pain in such beauty with your sanity, Tough to do but you still are writing
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I really like this is deep. The emotion and style is amazing. My favorite part was
Pain may feel horrid,
But without it,
How do you feel alive,
Love may hurt,
But without it,
There is no reason to live,
You may want to stop feeling,
But feeling is what makes life,
Life......
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