though these hands
have empty palms
extended to you
they will gather
your sorrows
take hold -
for my heart is full
and its flow…
will spill into yours
Author notes
something meaningful
A contest entry
- Choose 20 to 30 words and write by HopelessScribbles.
575 points, ended February 27, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This poem is so much YOU, Mal...meaningful and heartwarming.
~ Nicolette
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Thanks....
reaches out and grabs your hand.
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BRAVO!
With limited word usage, you have mastered the spirit of a giving soul. Open "palms" can give and receive. You have give and I accept. A heartwarming work of free verse here, dear poet. These words make me sigh.
I wish you the best in the contest.
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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oh yes
you have a heart of gold and the meaning of your words are those from the heart,I admire that in any human being, thank you for this entry, good luck
MM
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awwwww
such is Mally...
so sweet like the poet♥
Lynda
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