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Soaring




Traveling beyond the stars
past the planets and moons.

I open my heart and spirit

to gather your love close.

The passage is booked
and to your arms I come.

 

 

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10 poets

30 words

Prompt: Ticket to Ride

A contest entry

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  • chilali
    February 27

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    Oh wow. So very beautiful. Best of luck to you in the contest.

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Ken-Maverick
    February 27

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    You always pen such sweet writes Rifkin,
    Wonderful indeed, well done
    All the best to you in this contest

    Ken


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 27
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    beautiful

    very loving thoughts and words ..good work my friend..


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    February 27
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    Thank you for your entry.
    Nice thoughts here to ponder
    Juls