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ap...Touch My Hand

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if you feel alone

Touch my hand

 

if you want comfort

Touch my hand

 

We may not be together

both alone in foreign lands

my mind and heart are with you

Touch my hand

 

Reasons why we are alone

are different don't you see

but our thoughts are similar

Touch my hand

 

when you feel you need me

Touch my hand

 

in our minds we're both at home

Touch my hand

 

I touch your heart

              when you touch my hand

 

 

 

 

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  • Bruce silver member
    August 11, 2009

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    Leaf, this is beautiful. This is exactly the poem I needed to read at this moment! To feel someone reaching out to you when you feel all alone! Perfect! Thank you!

  • Liquid memories
    February 28, 2009
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    powerful thoughts

    Outstanding your words warm a heart that has been chilled by another. Touching a hand can be reassuring and comforting. I remeber once, had surgery, nurse held my hand while doctor operated, though it has been long ago, I have never forgotten those feelings. I thank you so much for sharing this.

  • Black-Fang
    February 27, 2009
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    an interesting take on the prompt and well written

    thanks for entering


  • LittleMoon silver member
    February 27, 2009

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    This a a really lovely take on the picture prompt. Well done and very good luck with it. Sheila

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