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Swell

Puffy orange fish bob for miles
as a sea of lips slide over me.








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  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    February 27
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    Good

    short and sweet,I agree, Great poem good message, love the imagery and the thoughts behind it. You done a great job . (QQ) There were no errors. No typos and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one. But if you don’t return the favor I will never Review you again.