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Because my Heart is not as Happy as it Seems (For I Will Never Fight the Darkness)

When the past comes back,
when she floods your mind.
Such ill timing.

When her silent feet,
Tiptoe back into your heart,
Such ill timing.

My first love,
My last love.

Undeniable.

The love never disappeared,
It never fucking disappeared.
I forgot for a moment.
It returned in an instance

I can’t move on
When the path has divulged
Blissful memories.

I can’t have her back.
I am lost.
I am crying.
I shan’t be found.

Dead inside.
Leave me here.

Author notes

Caution: Contains a swear word.

I used:
4. "Our hearts will beat in separate rooms tonight." That '70s Song
As inspiration.

Enjoy,
Trent.

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Comments


  • Truetome
    March 2

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    a true love poem here. smiles. o' the aching heart we have all felt is expressed here in this little poem. congrats on the silver. Love,


  • SilverSea
    March 1

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    Heh. Caution indeed. I love the repetition, and definitely the title. I really think this is great. And I kinda love the fact that you used shan't. Thanks so much for entering- I honestly loved it.

    • Hey there!
      Sincere thanks for the Silver, made my day all smiley

      Haha I shan't forget it