here's an overdue apology
for my blue mondays, angry tuesdays
black wednesdays, moody thursdays
and thuder-and-lightning fridays
here's an overdue i-love-you
that stays somewhere on the edge of
my tongue, my head, my thoughts
all the week, all the months, all year
here's an overdue tear from me
for making something inside you break
and slapping rain pellets on your
lovely you-make-me-crazy smiles
here's an overdue poem
that isn't exactly sweet, or sappy
just a lot of truth jumbled up in
stanzas full of nothing
but love.
Author notes
dedicated to my three lovlies.
TheGreatestLove, Transit, Beauty of Silence
sorry guys if i ever hurt you with what i said...you guys brighten up everything in my life, it'll drive me crazy to lose you all. i love you.
-charu (:
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AWWW you little patunia! (i had to say that, sorry) but anyhoo, this was touching, and no need for apologies! i woke up on the wrong side of bed today, i'm just not myself, and i'm still the same as yesterday, but like what the heck, i know you'll always be here for me, and thats aparently all that keeps me going!
And you dont ever have to worry about hurting me. whats the most that can happen? i'll get pissed, make your life miserable, b*tch about and make your life even more miserable, and then somehow you always make me come around! and i just cant stay mad at you, coz like you always talk to me about it, and i know you mean what you say!
So yeash, just like weewee, u brightened up my morning! aaand, i'm talking to wee about Cows having FLUS! here's a question for you to ponder about "what would happen if cows caught THE DEADLY FLU?" i mean, cows dont sneeze do they 
Anyhoo, i'm sidetracking alot and talking crazy talk. but I LOVE YOU! and i know i havent told you that lately, but i really do! me hearts charu forever and ever. and trust me, anyone or anything that comes in the way of us, is just gonna have to put up with my B*tch Fit! just saying! 
LOVE YOU TONNES
and thanks again for this poem!
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haha love you too girl you rock my life. and my stinky socks. and thanks for putting up with my stuff too. it's crazy if i had a friend like myself...lmao i'd be scared of coming to school!
love you too man.
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thanks so much for this.
your poem has brightened me this morning.
have a long day ahead today, and i'm glad that no matter what, i have a great friend like you to always back me up.
here's an overdue hug for all the times that you guys made me feel that i belong somewhere in school.
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aww wee here is a huge suffocating hug back. man, you probably had a scary morning what with ranji talking to you about sick cows.
hey you'll belong anywhere, anytime, anyplace because you always ALWAYS make the people there feel loved like crazy. man, i am hopeless devoted to you....
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aaww
you are a lovely, sweet (ambitious and scarey at times) girl and I would be crazy to lose you. I loved this poem and how sad it was for us when all we want to do is be good but weel, life gets in the way and we shout at those who mean the most to us. all we can do is know that it wasn't meant.
Thank you so much dearie XD I really love this poem and your friendship is all I need. (scarey) the negatives are canceled out when friendhip comes into play.
loveees,
transit
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awww thanks to you too man cant wait to see you tomorrow haha. you are such a sweetie piece of gooey honey. lmao. thanks for everything too dear..may the sun shine on you everyday.
PS. i love the ending of your comment.
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an interesting and compassionate write in true verse
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