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The itsy bitsy teenie weeine man (short story)

Once upon time there was a man with a tiny penis,
I laughed so hard I cried.
I got shoes with more inch.
The end.

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  • L.Jay
    February 27
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    haha wonderful. short but hilarious, no pun intended!


  • medicalpoet
    February 27

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    many applause, Amy

    well, that sucks for you 'cause he was use to the little penis. Keep it the way it is. I would not change anything.
    -medi


  • crysolia
    February 27
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    going over the edge

    applauding myself for being weird


  • Chrispm84
    February 27

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    Well... I think your short story is funny as hell... You should send "him" a link to this page... You know you want to!!!