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Real Know-How (Muthafucka)

I don't bother quotin' song lyrics because
every faggot who has a microphone can
scream and tell you their own emotions;
Well, I'd rather cast myself into the ocean.

No one can say it as well as I can, man
I'm a one-man band --- I'll make fights and take my stand

A scream is more pure when it comes from my lips
A fuck is more intense when it comes from my hips
Bruises fucking bleed when they come from my fist
Hypnosis lasts longer without voice-box piss

I want it real!
I want it now!
I want experience
and know-how!
I want it real!
I want it now!
I want experience
and know how...

Motherfucker you better
step back and shutter
You're the toast and I'm the butter, You
Huddle under your desk
and look
like an owl
with big round eyes
n' furrowed brows
but wow, you're lackin' that precious know-how tao
(how will you know how, now?) Motherfucker!

...

Girl, girl, girl, girl
You, you---
You quote lyrics and poetry
Words that flow from your lips like geometry

you're starin' off into space all day
daydreamin' like you're a fuckin' butterfly
is there a special rose
that you're supposed to fly by?

well, baby, I've got news for you...

Only clocks sit still and move
at the same time; I hate to break your heart
there darlin',
but you haven't got a chime (nor the time)

I want it real!
I want it now!
I want experience!
and know-how!
I want it real!
I want it now!
I want experience
and know-how...

I'm different from you
I'm trying to live my dream
and act it out like play
while at the same I see
that hope alone won't pay
so maybe one day,
when I know I can't stay
i'll be forced to find my way

Well...

A scream is more pure when it comes from my lips
A fuck is more intense when it comes from my hips
Bruises fucking bleed when they come from my fist
Hypnosis lasts longer without voice-box piss

I want it real!
I want it now!
I want experience!
and know-how!
I want it real!
I want it now!
I want experience
and know-how...

I want it real, yeah...
now, yeah. . .
experience and
know-how. . .
I want it real, yeah. . .
now, yeah. . .
the experience
to know how...

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  • KatherineAnne
    February 27

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    This is amazing. There were some parts that I thought seemed a little awkward, but there weren't many.

    "A scream is more pure when it comes from my lips
    A fuck is more intense when it comes from my hips
    Bruises fucking bleed when they come from my fist
    My hypnosis lasts longer without voice-box piss"

    Those were my favorite lines.


    • Methusala
      February 27
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      thanks a bunch! i'm still tweaking it a bit... the song version won't get out of my head... hopefully i can tweak it some more someday if i ever get the chance to put the song version into practice.