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Wisdom Cries

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Bleed For Me
©copyright 2004 Bonita M Quesinberry


Adam fell,
Jesus soared.
Yet, with His Word you are bored?

Flooding came,
Earth was cleaned.
His Word you've still never gleaned?

Seas parted,
Jews were freed.
But, you prefer lust and greed?

Christ was born,
and death died.
Yet, for wealth your heart doth cry?

"Bleed for me!"
all declared.
And, your way seems more than fair?

Prophets speak,
truth is heard.
Still, you follow wicked herds?

Time is short,
sin no more.
Will you die, or with Him soar?

Christ returns,
it's too late.
And, your sins you won't abate?

Fire consumes,
Purifies.
Yet, you hold to mankind's lies?

All is said,
it is done!
Of His you read . . . not—word—one.

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  • Wow, is just about all I can get out, sometimes it appears or seems so easy to 'miss' it, but in here you give us fair warning, indeed

  • Thank you for this entry.


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    February 27
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    Lovely ryming, conveying the message very clear and loud
    Well done


  • afzal shauq
    February 27

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    a good and realistic poem...wow ..like it very much...inspiring with good logic..well done...hope you go trough my poems too...here and in www.postpoems.com/members/afzalshauq to


    • BonnieQ silver member
      February 27
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      Thank you, Afzal, for such encouraging words. I shall be visiting you!

      Luv & hugs, BonnieQ

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