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No More Pain

I go to a bridge
And tears fall from my eye.
I want to end the pain,
I don't want to cry.

I hurt so much,
I want to die.
I hope to leave
From your side.

I hid the bruises,
I hid the shame,
But not anymore.
You now get the blame.

You don't understand,
You never will.
You don't understand
You put me through hell.

You made me stay silent,
You made me swear
To secrecy.
I don't know how you dared.

I look down at the ground
And see people gathering.
I jump, the pain comes.
And then... peace is neverending.

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  • wow i hope you dont really feel this way if you do i am here for you if you want a friend to talk to this poem was very sad i hope you never do this dont let anyone hurt you but dont you kill yourself either thanks for sharing s

  • aleesa14
    February 27
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    i likd it alot


  • xxDemonicxx
    February 27
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    i loved it =) nice poem keep up the gd work

  • tonyferelli
    February 27
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    wow... very good, very deep