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Gold at 404, sounds like a stock bid
which isn't a contest at all
more like a sure thing
sinking fast.

It also sounds like a true life skid
where contests are used to forestall
the chance of a real thing
which might last.

Winning might just be a counter bid
To stop contestant's free fall
Inspiring the pen to sing
As in the past.


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  • Night Hope gold member
    October 19, 2009

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    I, too, have seen contests with an unusual number for the rewarded points. One was 400 for gold, 53 for silver and 5 for bronze, I think. Why even bother for those amounts, unless you know your pen will win?


  • Draig aine gold member
    March 19, 2009
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    well done

    so true my friend so true


  • penman gold member
    February 28, 2009
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. A great write. Best of luck in the contest.


  • AsIThink gold member
    February 28, 2009

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    LOL - for some strange reason, this made me laugh. Was that supposed to happen? I don't know: let me check the contest rules (hahaha). Yeah, how about it? There is such an irony flinching (to me) in your words.

    "which isn't a contest at all
    more like a sure thing
    sinking fast"

    [haha...I still found some humor in this whether it was intended that way or not. What I DIDN'T find, was anything in the 'rule book' telling me what I SHOULD be thinking after reading this. So, I made up my own interpretation. LOL].

    Great little piece here hawk. A pleasure to read.

    AIT...


  • ronnica
    February 27, 2009

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    Where contests are used to forestall
    the chance of a real thing
    which might last. I like that,
    Nothing is for free they say, especially,, a game of chance. well writ

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