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Wondering

Slipping away from time
Existence seems so futile
Standing on the edge of abyss
Wondering...
Where the winds will take you
Clouds reveal silver linings
As the sky begins to fall
Patience...
It brings everything to an end
Dashed hopes, shattered dreams
And unfathomable indifference
Silence...
The eclipse seems eerie
Not a sound to be heard
Looking upon the stars
Feelings...
Nothing, complete emptiness
Where has it gone?
Why did it end?
Annihilation...
Desperate for the chords
Of life's final mystery
You pray
Damnation...
I tried, I really did
You scream
The cold bites
Judgment...
Fear comes
Eyes close
Tears stain
Aftermath...

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  • twistdilusion
    March 10

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    i like this but i found it hard to concentrate on whether the verse before the one word was meant for that one word or if the one word was meant for the verse following it..... in any case it makes sense lol