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Longing

Connections
sought vainly
appear as
mirages

Almost tangible
but veiled
in sordid
complexities

Indifferent and
cold, love
will cruelly
tease

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prompt: longing

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  • wildflower. gold member
    February 27, 2009

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    Nicely written.
    Love the words here, they create great imagery.
    Bravo!
    Thank you, and good luck

    ♥ Kate


  • lovemuffins
    February 27, 2009
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    i liked this!