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Counting Hours

Buzzing livewire,
electric soul.
Watching the sun sizzle
until our pupils burn black.
Skin bumps build and stack.
Flailing legs boredly bang
against the tree house ladder.
Children snicker below
begging for some play.

Hours. Hours.

Creepy teeth, impatient smile,
send the sun to die
and Resurrect his life!
Picking crust off peanut butter sandwich
and tossing to the crumb-eaters.
Gollum's precious sleeps.
Yesss.

Hours. Hours.

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Hurry up PEANUT!

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  • Salt Therapy
    March 22

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    beautiful: the chosen word to best describe the writer and the written. can be amplified by: I fucking love you.