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Prewritten destiny!

The karmic wheel of
    kaleidoscopic life
          stopped rotating

Hands of  Lord Death
  opened
    to write
          her END

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Prompt : Picture by Steven Wittens

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  • Venugopal gold member
    February 27
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    congrats my sweet Kiddy


  • Venugopal gold member
    February 27
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    true and poetic Kiddy

    thanks for sharing


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    February 27
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    so profoundly descriptive... x


    • Kiddy
      February 27
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      Glad you liked my little poem..thanks for the gold!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 27
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    OOPs...missed these


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 27

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    Powerful write...Word choice excellent. Very dramatic...Nothing should be changed...

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