Longing for
touch
hands gliding down
body
memories hold you
close
as skin brushes
mine
wistfully gazing into your
eyes-
wishing that this, could last.
So alone, without you
here
tears fall in
whispers;
against cheeks
you used to hold my
hand
now, it's only
memories-
that hold, my heart
Author notes
50 words Exactly
Prompt: picture AND the word: Longing
A contest entry
- [[15/5-50/30]] by wildflower..
510 points, ended February 27, 2009, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well done, nice word choice and congrats on the bronze.
mj.
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This is very touching.
Such a sad tale told here.
Wonderful take on the prompt!
Thank you, and good luck
♥ Kate
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YOU ARE MIND BLOWING
I love your poem .its great .you are my role model .u are so good .
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Wow, very beautifully done sis!
I love the second stanza in this.
Well done and all the best to you here!
Jeremy0826
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wow
very nicely done i love the pic for this great job with the prompt i love the write also great job amaizng wirte love it keep up the good work chrissy truly amazing keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day -
Nicely done.
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