gretchen lost herself in the forest
and grew into a tree--
arms metamorphosed
into wood,
her fallen branches
work to frame
one last attempt at a
masterpiece
Author notes
prompt:
http://s165.photobucket.com/albums/u45/Zephyr_Aryn/?action=view¤t=015-1.jpg
A contest entry
- Quick Photo Prompt- Lots of Possibilities! by Zephyr Aryn.
1100 points, ended March 1, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
rip it
Comments
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very well done
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This is what the life is a..its attempt is always unpredictable..and touching to bring the truths arounds..maybe painful ones..well said..
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You have quite a unique take on the photo prompt. There's a lot packed into such a little poem. It's almost like a little fable of sorts. Thank you for your entry.
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I'm not sure if you were going for this, but this poem made me chuckle. It has a dark sort of humor to it, but it also tells a wonderful little story in less than 10 lines. Very fun to read (which I've already done several times) and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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I did intend it. Good to know it came through... glad you liked it.
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