Shower me in crimson,
O Lord ~
let Thy Blood
wash away
my transgressions.
Author notes
Credit:
Exodus 7:19 by ^RockstarVanity @ DA
http://rockstarvanity.deviantart.com/art/Exodus-7-19-61185620
13 Words
A contest entry
- PIF 10X13XHome time by Exodus.
400 points, ended February 28, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - About Something Red by Kiddy.
400 points, ended March 16, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short, simple and strong. so much said in very few words. The words themselves show how redeemed the speaker is, as he realized that god's grace will wash away his transgressions.
My Score
How Red it was – 8.9/10
Diction – 9/10 –
Theme – 10/10
Presentation – 9.3/10
Creativity – 9.8/10
Total – 47.2/50
Very Good score!! All the best in the contest!!!
Love and regards
Kiddy
Will be expecting your lovely participation in my next contests too. Thanks for your valuable time.
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Just brilliant with excellent imagery and emotions. Yes it is refreshing to one's soul when reading this truth. Thank you so much for sharing and this would be the ultimate reason to write on the color Red. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Kelle Marie
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Very intriguing. I think this is one of those pieces that is incredibly easy to expand upon. Even as it is now though, I could almost hear this, like a whispered prayer. Thank you
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Very beautiful write. simple in form yet it carries on into the heart and speaks volumes to the soul. well done
-deadly -
That is why he died;
It is therefore done!
Thus rising from the dead states it so.
thank you for the read!
There now my first commet on yours.
have a nice day!
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a wonderful poem good luck in the contest
maralisa
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