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wine bath

with juiced 
grapes, red-roses,
I showered like a queen

but still I’m dark!

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Pic Prompt : Exodus 7:19 by ^RockstarVanity @ DA
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[this picture reminded me of my friend who worries that she is dark complexioned and she is very much behind fairness creams and lotions..thank you]

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  • Exodus gold member
    February 28, 2009

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    Very interesting! This is completely different to what I thought anyone would come up with, given the prompt. But that's part of the reason why I love these contests. Thank you