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My First Dance

An awkward child of 8 or 9
Lanky and plain,
I sat in a dirty red fold up chair
At a despondent party
In a dress that was too big
In all the wrong places
Bored, I tapped my foot to the beat

A boy approached me
An awkward child of 8 or 9

Unsure yet inexplicably confident,

He held out his hand

And nodded towards the dance floor

 

I shook my head, murmured,

"I can't dance, there are

Too many people watching.

I might trip or step on you".

 

He smiled slightly, revealing

A rather gap-toothed grin

That belonged to many awkward children of 8 or 9,

And giggled heartily

 

He did a deep bow, kissed my tiny hand,

and said in his best grown-up voice,

"There is only the dance"

He had me at the kiss.

 

I smiled, revealing my very own

Awkward gap-toothed grin,

Took his hand, and allowed myself

To be led to the dance floor.

 

I had no inhibitions during that dance

I didn't seem lanky, and the dress fight just right.

After all, there were no other worries, for

There is only the dance.

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  • amazing

    aww this was adorable.


  • individuality gold member
    March 13

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    a good piece - i can not remember ever dancing at such a young age, sounds like a good experience to me.


  • rbruce gold member
    March 8

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    Lovely. This would have been the golden poem had I been judge. A poignant story told with balance and style.


  • Yenny S.
    February 28
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    Such a cute, picturesque setting, I loved it~Yen


  • wwfhrocks14
    February 26
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    Awwww, This is adorable. Did it really happen? I loveee ittttt. I love your way with words.

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