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Screaming Inside!

I can't help but scream inside
I can't help but cry my tears

and my bloody truth reveals
a past not worth reliving.

Seconds from sure destruction
someone lifted me up,

saved me.
And I love her...
My guardian Angel...

She sits upon my shoulder
and she watches over my bruised past,

and she helps heal those scars,
that won't heal alone.

I am screaming inside,
crying for vengence
praying for petenence
and bleeding for my life
to be rebuilt again

What do you think? Anything I can work on?

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  • BettieSue
    March 1

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    This is so anazingly written.
    And it shows your great talent, really well
    "Seconds from sure destruction
    someone lifted me up," - My favorite for sure

    Keep spitting your hert out on paper


  • SoundsOfSilence
    February 27

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    This is so well written, I want to say it is pretty, but pretty just doesn't fit. Oh well. It is pretty. Very pretty. I love it.

    ~~silently-breaking